he bar chart below the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of Australian men’s and women’s Daily physical exercise in 2010. It can be clearly seen that

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55 to 64

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the highest

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of daily exercise activity

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of men doing daily exercise activity for the youngest

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(15 to 24), was just over 52

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, but it plummeted to just over 42

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in

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of

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25 to 34.

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fall slightly under 40

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for the productive

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there was a

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increase to just over 43

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(45 to 54

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old), 45

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(55 to 64

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old) 46

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(55 to 64

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old) respectively.

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, the

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for the youngest women (15 to 24) was over 47

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and it continued

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slightly for

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25 to 34 to just over 48

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of 35 to

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rose significantly to just over 52

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, and the 45 to 54 group of

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reach

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at 53.3

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, the

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of 55 to 64

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old remained steady at 53

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. There was a

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for 65 and over

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to just over 46

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