The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The graphs present the
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both
computer
ownership
and
computer
ownership
by education level from 2002 to 2010. It clearly sees that the use of computers has increased steadily from 53
percent
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per cent
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in 2002 to 75
percent
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per cent
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in 2010, with a rise in a
couple
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years shown in the graph. When considering the use of computers in the different levels of education, it showed that lower educational level has a smaller number of
computer
ownership
. There
was
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were
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about 13
percent
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per cent
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in 2002 and 38
percent
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per cent
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in 2010 for no high school diploma people, which showed far much lower than high school graduate people.
However
, the number of
computer
ownership
has climbed steeply to 75
percent
in 2002 and 90
percent
for those who
has
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have
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postgraduate degrees.
Therefore
, the postgraduate persons are the most own
computer
. So, it can be concluded that higher educational degrees have more likely increased the number of
computer
ownership
.
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