The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how electricity will be generated by using geothermal energy.
Overall
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this
is a complex process that generates electricity by steaming Linking Words
water
to achieve energy exchange.
For the underground part, cold Use synonyms
water
will be pumped down to the injection well by a Use synonyms
4.5-kilometer
tube underground. Change the spelling
4.5-kilometre
Then
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water
was boiled by the geothermal zone and transferred to the production well. At Use synonyms
last
, the hot Linking Words
water
will be pumped up to the condenser on the ground.
The condenser converts hot Use synonyms
water
to a stream and lets it spread to the generator turbine. The stream will drive the equipment to rotate to produce electricity.Use synonyms
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