The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The charts depict the amount of three
type
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types
nutrients
(sodium, saturated Change preposition
of nutrients
fast
, and added sugar) in 4 meals time (breakfast, lunch, snacks, and dinner). Correct your spelling
fat
Overall
, percentage
of sodium in dinner is the highest Correct article usage
the percentage
amongst
all meals. Change preposition
among
While
percentage
of added sugar in snacks is 42% the highest Add an article
the percentage
amongst
others.
In detail, the nutritional content for breakfast is Change preposition
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in
average the same for 3 nutrients which is 14-16%. Change preposition
on
In contrast
, the highest percentage of sodium and saturated fat contained in dinner time for 30-40%. Moreover
as for Add a comma
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the
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apply
lunch time
, the nutrient content is around 20% on average.Correct your spelling
lunchtime
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