The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the proportion of young people below 19 years old in the United Kingdom from 1990 and 2001.
Overall
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between 10-14 keep a gradually increasing trend, other groups have a great fluctuation over a period of 11 years. At the beginning of the period,
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between 15 to 19 have the highest point at about 26.3 per cent, which is much higher than
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between 10-14 at around 23.1 per cent. Before rising gradually from 1994 to 2001,
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between 15 to 19 saw a significant decline from 1990 to 1994.
While
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from 10 to 14 rise constantly over the periods.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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