Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport Write an email to your friend. In your email * recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn * explain how your friend could learn this sport * suggest that you both learn this sport together.

I am writing to answer your question. I want to say thank you for asking me for advice. I did some research and ı can try to explain which
sports
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sport
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is better for you.
Firstly
we look your
interets
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interests
interest
. Which do you like? Nature, Sea, team
sports
, personal
sports
. I think we can look around
see
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and see
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sports
because you are living near the beach. I remember your
neighborhood
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have
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a sailing club. You can get a membership
fort
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for
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his
sports
. When you
doing
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do
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this
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these
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sports
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sport
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you feel more freedom and
thinking
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complex. And you can improve your
physcial
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physical
fitness because if you
fighting
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the sail, you need
muchmore
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much more
muscle.
This
sports
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sport
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can be
little
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a little
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bit difficult but if you do more practice you can
understanding
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understand
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easily you should read more
teorical
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theoretical
books and
doing
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sailing more than hours. If you choose thıs.
sports
maybe one day we can do together. Because ı am planning to buy a new sail.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your email has a clear structure with an introduction, main body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear purpose, introducing the topic, explaining details, and ending with a closing thought.
coherence cohesion
Work on developing your ideas fully. Each point in your email should be explained and supported with examples or further details. Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs more logically.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the task. Make sure to give a clear recommendation, explain how your friend can learn the sport, and make a specific suggestion to learn the sport together, backing it up with reasons or benefits.
task achievement
To improve clarity, ensure that your ideas are expressed comprehensively. Use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to clearly communicate your suggestions and explanations.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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