The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are six pie charts illustrating the percentage of
water
used in 6 areas of the world namely North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
. The usage
of the water
is focussed on three purposes, industrial use
, agricultural use
and domestic use
.
Overall
, the purpose of using water
was seen maximum in agricultural areas in most parts of the world. On the whole, Central Asia
had the maximum usage
of water
in the agricultural sector amongst all the areas which accounted for 88%.
In terms of domestic use
, the water
usage
witnessed was lesser in Central Asia
and South East Asia
both recorded at 7%. The domestic water
usage
in South America
was one-fifth of the water
usage
in all sectors whereas
North America
and South America
witnessed 13% and 19% respectively.
Regarding the consumption of water
in industries, the data varies where North America
witnessed half of the total water
usage
, and the consumption in Central Asia
stands only at 5%.Submitted by aarushibhate on
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