The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the career choices in 9 different sectors of
students
who finished studying at Brighton University in 2019.
Overall
, the Service industry had the highest number of employees from Brighton University and manufacturing is the second place involving graduates from this
university. In contrast
, Charity accounted for the lowest share.
According to
the data, services industries had the highest proportion, occupying a third in 2019. In addition
, three stages in average rate , namely manufacturing industry, Politics and government and Education were made up for 16.3%, 12.1%, 14.7
respectively.
With respect to the remaining sorts of job choices, transportation and warehousing constituted 7.8% of Correct word choice
and 14.7
students
graduating ,while
Science technology slightly followed, a mere 7.3% of students
who graduated at Brighton. Besides
that, Civil service reached 5.6% during the period. Lastly
, the lowest proportions among 9 sectors were Sport and Charity, which comprised 0.1% and 0.3% of students
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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