The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Line Chart depicts the
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criminals'
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criminal's
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proportion
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the USA
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South Africa for 35 years (1985-2020). Correct your spelling
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USA
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the USA
UK
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the UK
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South Africa showed an upward trend over the period stated.
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the USA
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1995, after which it suddenly dropped to above 100 in 2020. Change preposition
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Likewise
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, criminal rates started at 100 (1985) and reached a peak in 1995 (at 400), Correct article usage
the UK
then
experienced decline
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the crime rates in Australia, it can be seen that the total is under 100 for the whole 35 years.
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Conversely
, the South Africa
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period
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