The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line Chart depicts the
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criminals
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propotion
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proportion
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in
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the USA
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USA
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the USA
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, UK, Australia
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South Africa for 35 years (1985-2020).
In
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a glance, the number of
crime
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crimes
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in
USA
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the USA
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, Australia and
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decreased,
while
South Africa showed an upward trend over the period stated.
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, and it dramatically rose
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400
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1995, after which it suddenly dropped to above 100 in 2020.
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the UK
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, criminal rates started at 100 (1985) and reached a peak in 1995 (at 400),
then
experienced
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the
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next 25 years. Following that, there
is
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no significant changes
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the crime rates in Australia, it can be seen that the total is under 100 for the whole 35 years.
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Africa
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criminals
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criminal
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rate right over the early period started at above 200
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and rose to 400 in 1995, it was slightly above the
USA
and it climbed significantly to 600
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the end of
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(2020).
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