The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line plot depicts the average
temperature
in each month of three renowned cities. The X-axis shows the months and the Y-axis indicates the Temperature
in Celcius.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in Dubai and Paris
until July whereas
, in the case of Sydney, it was downward. The reverse is true in the case of the rest of the period.
Looking at the details, with regards to Sydney, its temperature
was the highest in January, and the value was 24 degrees centigrade, which was approximately five times compared to Paris
. Then
it gradually decreased and reached the lowest of 13 in July. After that, it started to increase and reached 23 in December, which was the highest at that time.
On the other hand, the increasing rate of Dubai and Paris
was similar from January to July. Then
, the temperature
of Paris
levelled off at 20 degrees Celsius, but it increased for the other country
and reached the peak at 36 degrees, which was the zenith of any country at any time. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Then
both plummeted and Dubai reached 22, but Paris
at its minimum of 5.Submitted by tanvir0507 on
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