The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at the first line graph provided illustrates how many people travelled by train in Sydney over a decade from 1995 to 2004,

while

the second line graph reveals some data about the

trains

ran on

time

in the corresponding

time

.

Overall

, Unlike the number of

passangers

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passengers

that followed an upward trend until a level off in 2001, the percentage of

trains

running on

time

indicates a downward trend after some fluctuations throughout the given

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period. In 1995,

number

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of train passengers used to be

an

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at an

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all-

time

low of 250

million

individuals. Following some gradual increases it reached

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just over 265

million

passengers in 1999, prior to reaching a peak of 300

million

passengers in 2001. The amount of train users

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off

then

and reached a plateau with about 280

million

users.

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The percentage

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of

trains

running on

time

was approximately 92% in 1995,

likewise

, that of in 1998 and 2003 with the same amount. After a number of fluctuations between 1995 and 2003, the percentage of

trains

running on

time

plunged to just over 70% in the year 2004.