The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The bar chart and the table illustrate the comparison in earned value and proportion change for different kinds of exports from one country during the years 2015 and 2016. It is clear from the bar chart that there are five different categories with fluctuations in their export earnings in US dollars.
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, there are downwards and upwards in the value change rate of each category. There is a noticeable difference in petroleum products and Textiles that were exported from one country between the years 2015 and 2016. In 2015 and 2016, petroleum goods had the highest earnings from the exportation process about 60 and 62 billion US dollars respectively.
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, textiles generated the lowest revenues in 2015 and 2016 around 25 and 32 billion US dollars respectively.
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closer examination of the figures in the table for the textiles
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revealed the greatest positive increase of at least 15.24% in 2016.
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,gems and jewellery had the sharpest decrease almost 5.18% in 2016. These charts show that petroleum products were the major exported goods in 2015 and 2016.
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country flourished in the exportation because of petrol.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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