Write a letter of complaint about late delivery to the website where you ordered an item. In the letter, you should tell:- - What item did you order? - Why and when did you order that item? - How would you like them to resolve this issue?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are doing well. I writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about late
delivery from your side. I ordered some goods baby and clothes for 0-12 Correct article usage
the late
month
. I ordered Fix the agreement mistake
months
that's
stuff on July 23 2023 but until I write Unnecessary verb
that
this
letter the goods have not arrived.
In addition
, I ordered the goods because my friend just had a baby and I would like to give her present
Correct article usage
a present
for
celebrate the birth. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, I should to
go to her house in about three days.
I am very Change the verb form
apply
dissapointed
with the service you provided because you have Correct your spelling
disappointed
problem
with time management. Correct article usage
a problem
This
already
late from the submission deadline. I would like to refund my money or you can re-send my stuff. Add a missing verb
is already
Furthermore
, if you can use shipping within one day. Lastly
, you should to
check your employees' performance because it is one of the important things that make your Change the verb form
apply
bussines
is growing.
I am waiting for your good faith
Best regards,
JackCorrect your spelling
business
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coherence cohesion
Consider using an organizational pattern that immediately conveys your purpose to the reader and ensures each paragraph supports the main complaint in a clear, focused manner. Avoid mixing requests or information.
coherence cohesion
Ensure you start with a proper greeting and close with an appropriate sign-off that matches the tone of the letter. Avoid informal sign-offs in a formal complaint letter.
coherence cohesion
Your letter should clearly state each point in separate paragraphs: one for the issue, one for the background of the order, and one for the proposed solution.
task achievement
Your letter appropriately addresses all three bullet points but could include more specific details about the item and the order to enhance the response.
task achievement
While the letter's tone is mostly formal, it contains colloquial expressions ('stuff') and informal phrases ('Hope you are doing well') that are not suitable for a formal complaint letter. Maintain a consistently formal tone throughout.