the maps below show an industrial area in the town or Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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It is shown a map of Norbiton town, specifically the industrial area and its potential development. There are elements of the main

road

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, farmland, town, river, and

factory

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drawn on the map. Currently, the main

road

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is on the south part and has a vertical

road

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to the north, connected to a roundabout and only one other

road

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of the roundabout towards the east.

This

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industrial area has three

factories

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located around the west

side

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of the roundabout and two

factories

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on each

side

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of the east

road

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with one

factory

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at the end

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, resulting

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in a

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total of eight

factories

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. The farmland is on the upper

side

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after the east-west river. The future plan for Norbiton includes a reshaping of

main

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the main

a main

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road

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factory

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a factory

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replacement and an addition of facilities,

such

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as shops,

medical

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a medical

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centre,

playground

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a playground

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, and

school

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a school

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First,

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the reconstruction of the main

road

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involves creating a smaller roundabout on the main

road

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and

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addition

as well as

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extension

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the extension

an extension

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of the roads that are connected to the big

roundabaout

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roundabout

in the

center

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centre

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Second,

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the previous east

side

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road

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will no longer be connected to a single

factory

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rather

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a school. A playground is

also

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built on the north

side

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of the east

road

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. Between the two roundabouts, there are shops on the left

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while

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and

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a medical centre

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the right. All of the

factories

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are replaced with housings,

along with

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its relocation. There are

also

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two roads added connected in the

center

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centre

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and a connection to the farmland.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, factory, factories, side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

249 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
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