the maps below show an industrial area in the town or Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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It is shown a map of Norbiton town, specifically the industrial area and its potential development. There are elements of the main
road
, farmland, town, river, and factory
drawn on the map.
Currently, the main road
is on the south part and has a vertical road
to the north, connected to a roundabout and only one other road
of the roundabout towards the east. This
industrial area has three factories
located around the west side
of the roundabout and two factories
on each side
of the east road
with one factory
at the end
, resulting a
total of eight Change preposition
in a
factories
. The farmland is on the upper side
after the east-west river.
The future plan for Norbiton includes a reshaping of main
Add an article
the main
a main
road
, factory
replacement and an addition of facilities, Correct article usage
a factory
such
as shops, medical
centre, Correct article usage
a medical
playground
, and Correct article usage
a playground
school
. Correct article usage
a school
First,
the reconstruction of the main road
involves creating a smaller roundabout on the main road
and an
addition Remove the article
apply
as well as
extension
of the roads that are connected to the big Add an article
the extension
an extension
roundabaout
in the Correct your spelling
roundabout
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Second,
the previous east side
road
will no longer be connected to a single factory
, rather
a school. A playground is Correct word choice
but rather
also
built on the north side
of the east road
. Between the two roundabouts, there are shops on the left while
a medical centre Correct word choice
and
on
the right. All of the Add a missing verb
is on
factories
are replaced with housings, along with
its relocation. There are also
two roads added connected in the center
and a connection to the farmland.Change the spelling
centre
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