The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented diagram delineates the day and night production of electricity a four stages. First of all , we can analyse that clearly at
firs
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glance the production of hydroelectric is
cycial
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cynical
cyclical
and consists of four main parts namely
High-llevel
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High-level
reservoir
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, flow of
water
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power station and low-level
reservoir
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. The
process
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begins when the
water
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flows from the river into
high-level
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a high-level
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reservoir
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and
end
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with
transmission
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the transmission
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of electricity to the national grid.
On the other hand
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,
while
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looking
the
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day stage of the
process
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we encounter channelling the river
water
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into a high-level
reservoir
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backed up by a dam.
Besides
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, intake is open. The generated electricity is
then
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sent to a national grid through power lines
while
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the excess
water
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runs to a low-level
reservoir
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. The night stage of
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process
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the process
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begin
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their
process
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in
low-level
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the low-level
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reservoir
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. The
water
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stored in the low-level
reservoir
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is reverted to the power station and the turbines of the generator pump ,
thus
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, it back into the high-level
reservoir
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which is closed during the night .
Consequently
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, The river
water
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is stored at the
high level
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high-level
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reserviour
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reservoir
.
Overall
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, The cycling of
electricty
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electricity
maintain
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maintains
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their
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its
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journey
with
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at
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this
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stage.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reservoir, water, process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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