The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram delineates the day and night production of electricity a four stages.
First of all , we can analyse that clearly at
firs
glance the production of hydroelectric is Correct your spelling
first
cycial
and consists of four main parts namely Correct your spelling
cynical
cyclical
High-llevel
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High-level
reservoir
, flow of water
power station and low-level reservoir
. The process
begins when the water
flows from the river into high-level
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a high-level
reservoir
and end
with Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
transmission
of electricity to the national grid.
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the transmission
On the other hand
, while
looking the
day stage of the Change preposition
at the
process
we encounter channelling the river water
into a high-level reservoir
backed up by a dam. Besides
, intake is open. The generated electricity is then
sent to a national grid through power lines while
the excess water
runs to a low-level reservoir
.
The night stage of process
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the process
begin
their Change the verb form
begins
process
in low-level
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the low-level
a low-level
reservoir
. The water
stored in the low-level reservoir
is reverted to the power station and the turbines of the generator pump ,thus
, it back into the high-level reservoir
which is closed during the night . Consequently
, The river water
is stored at the high level
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high-level
reserviour
.
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reservoir
Overall
, The cycling of electricty
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electricity
maintain
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maintains
their
journey Correct pronoun usage
its
with
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at
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