Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line
graph
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depicts the
number
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of people who were given
UK
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citizenship,
while
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the bar
graph
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gives information about the
number
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of individuals who are grouped based on the regions that were granted
UK
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citizenship. Both numbers in the graphs are represented in thousands.
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of people who become
UK
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residents increased, and most of them originally came from Asia.  
According to
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the line
graph
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,
initially
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, there were 20 thousand people who got citizenship in 1962. Ten years later, the
number
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rose to almost double but decreased marginally in 1982 to about 25. In 1992, the figure rose to around 45. After that, the
number
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increased dramatically to slightly below 120 in 2002.   Regarding the bar
graph
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, most of the immigrants in the
UK
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in 1996 originally came from Asia, representing 49.
This
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number
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rose to 58 six years later.
Next,
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Europe stood at 9, but
then
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became 25 in 2002. Similar to the former, Europe started at 9 and grew threefold in 2002,
while
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other categories stayed at a very small
number
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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