Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
graph
depicts the
number
of people who were given
UK
citizenship,
while
the bar
graph
gives information about the
number
of individuals who are grouped based on the regions that were granted
UK
citizenship. Both numbers in the graphs are represented in thousands.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of people who become
UK
residents increased, and most of them originally came from Asia.  
According to
the line
graph
,
initially
, there were 20 thousand people who got citizenship in 1962. Ten years later, the
number
rose to almost double but decreased marginally in 1982 to about 25. In 1992, the figure rose to around 45. After that, the
number
increased dramatically to slightly below 120 in 2002.   Regarding the bar
graph
, most of the immigrants in the
UK
in 1996 originally came from Asia, representing 49.
This
number
rose to 58 six years later.
Next,
Europe stood at 9, but
then
became 25 in 2002. Similar to the former, Europe started at 9 and grew threefold in 2002,
while
other categories stayed at a very small
number
.
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