The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of france in two years

The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of france in two years
The charts illustrate the proportion of five types of
energy
production
in France from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, Gas and Coal had the most significant sources of
energy
, around half over the percentage in both years.
While
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and others generated the least amount in
energy
production
, in all types of
energy
there was only minimal change over the
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period.
Energy
produced by Coal comprised 29,80% in 1995 and a slight increase
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30,93% in 2005.
Likewise
, in 1995 Gas the second place
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energy
production
generated 29,63%
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1995 which rose marginally to 30,31% in 2005. For the remaining
energy
production
, there was an increased trend of approximately 5% for nuclear and others to 10,10% and 9,10%, respectively.
On the other hand
, Petro which is the only
energy
production
has decreased from 29,27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005.
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