the diagrams below show tow methods of using water to produce electricity
The two pictures demonstrate the process of two ways of turning water into electricity.
Overall
, there are two differently complex methods to produce electricity by using liquid including a hydroelectric dam and wave-atmosphere generator.
Having looked at the first given diagram, hydroelectric dams will be situated near the river and water will flow through and be stored in the reservoir. Then
, the gate opens to let the aqua in. The width and angle of the penstock speed aqua up and the force of the water's flow will turn the turbine and spindle. Next,
the spindle rotates in the generator to produce electric power and electricity distributed to power lines. For remaining liquid will be released into the river.
Related to wave wind, it has a difference with hydroelectric dams. Normally, generators are placed at sea and the progress begins when waves enter the lower chamber. Next,
it pushes air into the upper chamber. Then
a rising breeze turns the turbine and spindle to rotate in the generator to produce electric power. Finally
, the remaining amount of the breeze is released from the upper chamber.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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