This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the percentage of four different materials that were recycled between 1982 and 2010 in a specific country.
Overall
, paper Linking Words
and
Correct word choice
apply
carboard
and glass containers have a greater recycling Correct your spelling
cardboard
rate
than Use synonyms
aluminium
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cans
and plastics. Use synonyms
However
, they do slightly fluctuate. The proportion of Linking Words
aluminium
Use synonyms
cans
that were recycled increased pretty consistently from around 1885 until around 2009. The recycling Use synonyms
rate
of plastic Use synonyms
also
increased yet not significantly.
The recycling Linking Words
rate
of paper Use synonyms
and
cardboard and glass containers faced fluctuations from about 1982 to approximately 2010. The amount of recycled paper and cardboard began Correct word choice
apply
with
a little above 60% in around 1982. Change preposition
at
This
fluctuated from around 1982 until around 1994. Linking Words
However
, it decreased consistently from 80% in approximately 1994 to 70% in around 2010. Fluctuations can Linking Words
also
be seen in the recycling Linking Words
rate
for glass containers. There Use synonyms
is
a 50% recycling Wrong verb form
was
rate
in around 1982, and Use synonyms
this
decreased to 40% in around 1990. Linking Words
However
, the recycling Linking Words
rate
increased from 40% in around 1990 to around 60% in about 2010.
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On the other hand
, the recycling Linking Words
rate
for Use synonyms
aluminium
Use synonyms
cans
and plastics increased throughout the years. The percentage of Use synonyms
aluminium
Use synonyms
cans
that were recycled in around 1986 is below 10%. The percentage increased consistently, reaching a little over 20% in around 2002. Use synonyms
Then
, Linking Words
this
increased at a greater Linking Words
rate
from around 2002 to approximately reaching 45% in around 2010. The proportion of plastics that were recycled increased slightly throughout the years. It began with a recycling Use synonyms
rate
of below 10% in around 1990 and almost reached 10% in around 2010.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, aluminium, cans with synonyms.
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