The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides data about the
percentage
of part-time
workers
in
England
, Northern
Ireland
,
Scotland
and
Wales
in 1980 and 2010
Overall
, both in 1980 and 2010
Wales
had the highest
percentage
of part-time
workers
. In 1980, the percentages of part-time
workers
in Northern
Ireland
and
and
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Scotland
were pretty similar with approximately 11 per
cent
and 15 per
cent
respectively. The rate of part-time
workers
in
England
was roughly 25 per
cent
,
meanwhile
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the
percentage
of part-time
workers
in
Wales
was more than 30 per
cent
which had the highest
percentage
of part-time
workers
in 1980. In 2010, Northern
Ireland
had the lowest
percentage
of part-time
workers
accounting for roughly 12 per
cent
. The rate of part-time
workers
in
Scotland
was a little less than 20 per
cent
. The percentages of part-time
workers
in
England
and
Wales
were pretty similar accounting for approximately 31 per
cent
and more or less 35 per
cent
. In 2010
Wales
had the highest
percentage
of part-time
workers
compared to
England
, Northern
Ireland
and
Scotland
.
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