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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, – explain what happened to you – give details of the day and time of the purchase – ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experienc

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
complaint
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complain
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 about the bad
coniditioned
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conditioned
 food from your
supermarket
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. I am
a
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apply
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Jennifer Ramos,
lives
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live
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 in
Park
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the Park
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 Avenue residential complex near
to
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apply
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your
supermarket
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. I
am
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have been
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regular
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a regular
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 customer of your
supermarket
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 for
past
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the past
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 3 years. Ever since I do not have any bad
experience
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experiences
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of
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with
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proudcts
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products
 from your
supermarket
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 except
last
Linking Words
 Monday, January 12, 2024. I bought 2
liter
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litre
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 of milk from your
supurmarket
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supermarket
 on above mentioned date. I have ensured before the purchase that the product
is
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has
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 not expired. I
have
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apply
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purchased some
vegitables
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vegetables
as well
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as
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on
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 the same day. Once I opened the milk bottle at home, I noticed that the product was spoiled. I would like to ask you
for
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apply
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how you will compensate
to
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for
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 the spoiled product. I would appreciate
if
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it if
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 you
will
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would
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 refund the full amount or provide a coupon for
the
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a
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 similar amount which I can use in my next purchase. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The body should have clearly separated paragraphs, each dealing with a specific part of the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Always double-check for typos or grammatical errors, as these can affect the clarity of your message. For instance, 'complaint' should be 'complain', 'bad coniditioned' should be 'badly conditioned', and 'I am a Jennifer Ramos, lives in Park Avenue residential...' has several errors and should be revised to 'My name is Jennifer Ramos, and I live in the Park Avenue residential complex...'.
task achievement
The prompt asks for details of the day and time of purchase; you have provided the day but not the time. Include all parts of the task in your response.
task achievement
The letter's tone is not entirely consistent with the formal style required by the task. Be sure to maintain a formal tone throughout and avoid contractions such as 'I'm' in formal writing.
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