You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, – explain what happened to you – give details of the day and time of the purchase – ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experienc
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to
complaint
about the bad Replace the word
complain
coniditioned
food from your Correct your spelling
conditioned
supermarket
.
I am a
Jennifer Ramos, Correct article usage
apply
lives
in Correct subject-verb agreement
live
Park
Avenue residential complex near Correct article usage
the Park
to
your Change preposition
apply
supermarket
. I am
Wrong verb form
have been
regular
customer of your Add an article
a regular
supermarket
for past
3 years. Ever since I do not have any bad Correct article usage
the past
experience
Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
of
Change preposition
with
proudcts
from your Correct your spelling
products
supermarket
except last
Monday, January 12, 2024. I bought 2 liter
of milk from your Change the spelling
litre
supurmarket
on above mentioned date. I have ensured before the purchase that the product Correct your spelling
supermarket
is
not expired. I Verb problem
has
have
purchased some Unnecessary verb
apply
vegitables
Correct your spelling
vegetables
as well
as
the same day. Once I opened the milk bottle at home, I noticed that the product was spoiled.
I would like to ask you Change preposition
on
for
how you will compensate Change preposition
apply
to
the spoiled product. I would appreciate Change preposition
for
if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
will
refund the full amount or provide a coupon for Wrong verb form
would
the
similar amount which I can use in my next purchase.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer RamosCorrect article usage
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The body should have clearly separated paragraphs, each dealing with a specific part of the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Always double-check for typos or grammatical errors, as these can affect the clarity of your message. For instance, 'complaint' should be 'complain', 'bad coniditioned' should be 'badly conditioned', and 'I am a Jennifer Ramos, lives in Park Avenue residential...' has several errors and should be revised to 'My name is Jennifer Ramos, and I live in the Park Avenue residential complex...'.
task achievement
The prompt asks for details of the day and time of purchase; you have provided the day but not the time. Include all parts of the task in your response.
task achievement
The letter's tone is not entirely consistent with the formal style required by the task. Be sure to maintain a formal tone throughout and avoid contractions such as 'I'm' in formal writing.