The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information regarding the percentage of households with electrical appliances
along with
how many hours per week are spent doing housework activity.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the first chart,
while
the percentage of washing machines rose slightly and the rate of vacuum cleaners increased gradually, there was considerable growth in the change in ownership of refrigerators. The second chart shows the
number
of hours of doing chores declined significantly during the period.
To begin
with, increasing to around 70
percent
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in 1960, the percentage of the changes in ownership of refrigerators experienced a slight increase to approximately 72% in 2019 after having a dip in 1980.
In addition
, vacuum cleaners had a gradual rise from around 30% in 1920 and reached its peak to 100% in 2000 and
this
number
was the same in the following 19 years.
On the other hand
, starting from around 2%
in
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the beginning of the period,
this
number
jumped to 100% in the span of 60 years, and
succeed
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to maintain
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this
number
till the end of the period. Turning to the second chart, the
number
of hours per week spent doing activities
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning, witnessed a significant decline from around 50% to 20% during four decades starting from 1920. In the following 40 years,
this
number
was relatively stable, hovering at around 15%, before
finally
dropping to just over 10% in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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