The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the sources of
police
budget and the charts Add an article
the police
demonstrates
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demonstrate
it's
expenses and 2018 in one Replace the word
its
erea
of Britain. in 2017
The largest share of Correct your spelling
area
police's
budget was provided Correct article usage
the police's
from
Change preposition
by
national
government. Add an article
the national
On the other hand
officer's and staff's salaries constitutes. a large part of the costs. Moreover
local taxesAdd a comma
Moreover,
,
and other sources have Remove the comma
apply
the
second and third places respectively in generating Correct article usage
apply
incom
As can seen Salaries Correct your spelling
income
the
charts, the largest cast after is buildings and transporting and didn't Change preposition
of the
change
between 2017 and 2018. Furthermore
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Furthermore,
thechnology
has Correct your spelling
technology
change
between 2077 and 2018 and it could gain 6 Change the verb form
changed
percent
more than Change the spelling
per cent
2017
.
In conclusion, the sources. of money input didn't Change preposition
in 2017
change
incredebly
and the types of money distribution Correct your spelling
incredibly
incredible
didot
Verb problem
did not
change
samificantly
as well.Correct your spelling
significantly
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