You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that there is a striking resemblance among the
town
centres developed in the modern era. However
, the situation is contrary in the walled city.
As far as, Gulberg, Model Town
, and Bahria Town
are concerned they are located on the main boulevard and designed by the
renowned architects where Correct article usage
apply
town
centres are modern, spacious
with lovely ambience. Correct word choice
and spacious
Nontheless
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Nonetheless
there
parking facility and security provide Correct your spelling
their
great
shopping experience.
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a great
However
, there are numerous issues with the walled city, it is highly congested, undeveloped
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and undeveloped
have
narrow streets, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
lack
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lacks
of
parking areas with pickpocketing, thefts, and high crime rates worsen the attraction.
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apply
Hence
, would you kindly spare some time to visit shah alam market
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Shah Alam Market
being
the business hub? I Unnecessary verb
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along with
other business communtiy
members will provide you visit through Correct your spelling
community
whole
market so that you can get an idea of Change the article
the whole
challenges
being faced by the customers and businessmen on Correct article usage
the challenges
daily
basis.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
BenCorrect article usage
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Coherence & Cohesion - Logical Structure
Ensure that your letter includes a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The content should be well-organized with a logical flow.
Coherence & Cohesion - Greeting and Closing
Open your letter with a greeting and close it with a suitable sign-off, followed by your name. Always maintain a polite and respectful tone throughout.
Coherence & Cohesion - Single Idea Per Paragraph
Start a new paragraph for each main idea, and ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and purpose.
Task Achievement - Complete Response
Fully address all parts of the task, ensuring that your letter discusses each bullet point in the prompt. Include an introduction that addresses the purpose of your letter, at least one paragraph for each main point, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement - Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain an appropriate tone that matches the context of the letter - in this case, a formal tone as you are writing to an editor. Use language that is respectful and appropriate for formal correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite