The graphs below show the average daily hours of sunshine and the average monly temperature in Darwin and Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The table illustrates the total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of Japan, Korea, Ireland, Portugal, Poland and

USA

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in the years 1980,1990 and 2000. Units are measured in millions of tonnes.

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, the most evident

conclusions

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are

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that the USA recorded the highest waste producer throughout the period.

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japan was the lowest producer. Korea and

poland

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Poland

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experienced a downward trend. At the beginning of the period,

korea

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was not produced waste and it made up 31 in 1990.

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it decreased in 2000. Poland witnessed a slight down in 2000.

USA

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was the prominent category and it dramatically increased

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of the period. Ireland was at 20 in 1980, and it doubled after 10 years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

120 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average daily sunlight
average monthly temperature
comparison
seasonal variations
geographical location
tropical climate
temperate climate
weather patterns
Darwin
Melbourne
temperature fluctuations
maximum temperatures
minimum temperatures
sunlight hours
degree Celsius
bar chart
line graph
to fluctuate
peak sunlight/temperature
troughs in temperature
overcast days
climatic conditions
thermal range
extremes of weather
meteorological data
data interpretation
data summary

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