The graphs below show the average daily hours of sunshine and the average monly temperature in Darwin and Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of Japan, Korea, Ireland, Portugal, Poland and
USA
in the years 1980,1990 and 2000. Units are measured in millions of tonnes.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, the most evident conclusions
Fix the agreement mistake
conclusion
are
that the USA recorded the highest waste producer throughout the period. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
While
,
japan was the lowest producer.
Korea and Remove the comma
apply
poland
experienced a downward trend. At the beginning of the period, Change the capitalization
Poland
korea
was not produced waste and it made up 31 in 1990. Change the capitalization
Korea
However
it decreased in 2000. Poland witnessed a slight down in 2000.
Add a comma
However,
USA
was the prominent category and it dramatically increased Correct article usage
The USA
at the end
of the period. Ireland was at 20 in 1980, and it doubled after 10 years.Submitted by dshansika97 on
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