The graphs give data about proportions of the results of a research at a new shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand
The graphs give data about
proportions
of the results of Correct article usage
the proportions
a
research at a new shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand
It can be seen that the satisfied proportion of shops, Remove the article
apply
restaurants
and design
gets highest
level. Change the article
the highest
while
the dissatisfied and no comment
proportion of those fields almost reached third place
and lowest position.
Speaking of restaurants
and design
, the satisfied
Replace the word
satisfaction
rate
always gets the first place
with 62 % (design
) and 55 %, 32 % of male shoppers
and female shoppers
respectively (restaurants
). Following that, the second place
belongs to the very satisfied rate
, 17 % for design
, 25 % and 27 % for male shoppers
and female shoppers
of restaurants
. Finally
, the third place
and lowest position are the dissatisfied rate
and no comment
rate
. At design
, they are 10 % and 11 % of
dissatisfied and Change preposition
apply
no
Add a missing verb
had no
comment
respectively. And at restaurants
, the dissatisfied
Replace the word
dissatisfaction
rate
is 5 % and 15 % for male shoppers
and female shoppers
respectively, the no comment
rate
is 15 % and 20 % for male shoppers
and female shoppers
respectively.
As regards shops, the percentage of satisfaction is 45% and 37% for male shoppers
and female shoppers
respectively. In addition
, the results of research of
male Change preposition
on
shoppers
is
17%, 20% and 18% with very satisfied, dissatisfied and no Change the verb form
are
comment
respectively. And the
results of research Correct word choice
The
of
female Change preposition
on
shoppers
is
34%, 20% and 9% with very satisfied, dissatisfied and no Correct subject-verb agreement
are
comment
respectively.Submitted by weezel on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurants, design, comment, place, rate, shoppers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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