The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrated pie charts above show the differences between several kinds of energy sources in France in 1995 and 2005. The data was categorized into five elements,
such
as gas, petro
, coal, nuclear, and other.
Correct your spelling
petrol
Overall
, it is evident that the top three energy sources remained the same within the two periods of time, which were Coal, Gas and Petro respectively. However
, there was a slight decrease in Petro where
Correct word choice
which
it
went from 29.27% in 1995 to approximately 19.55% in 2005. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In contrast
, Gas, Nuclear and Other experienced a significant rise over the same period of time.
Upon detailed observation, it was observed that the highest increase happened on
Other from 4.90% in 1995 to 9.10% in the next decade. Change preposition
in
However
, even if Other had the biggest increase, it still became the least source of energy compared to the rest. In addition
, Nuclear has the second highest increase from approximately 6.40% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005.Submitted by helma.devina on
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