The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the data of the four types

dairy

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production by the

world

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top three producers in 2012.

It is clear that

The European Union was always in the top three manufacturers for all

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of

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the dairy products. And

milk

was produced in

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higher number than others. To be specific with the information about

milk

and

cheese

production statistics, The EU took the lead as the greatest producer, which was 142,9MT and 7,12MT for

milk

and

cheese

. The United States was

also

a big player in these two products, which produced just slightly over 90MT for

milk

and almost 5MT for

cheese

. India

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127MT

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milk

which turned it

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the second top

producers

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.

Meanwhile

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about 700kg

cheese

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of cheese

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produced

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by Brazil as the third big producer. Turning to the data of butter and

milk

powder, it can be seen that the producers were dominantly taken by India and China, 4,5MT and 1,2MT separately. The rest of

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filled by the US and The UN,

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was 810kg and 770kg respectively.