Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.
In
this
modern state of globalisation
there are many interactions across different Add a comma
globalisation,
cultures
, especially when it involves people crossing national borders. Cultural adaptation needs to be done either by the visitors or the host country
. In my opinion, both scenario
are inevitable in the context of Change to a plural noun
scenarios
globalisation
, this
essay will further
explain on
these scenarios.
When visiting Change preposition
apply
to
other countries, people should be aware of and respect the local customs. By doing Remove the preposition
apply
this
, uncomfortable situations and conflicts could be avoided. Take a dressing
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a dressing culture
dressing cultures
cultures
for example
, there are certain cultures
that dress more modestly than the
others. If we Correct article usage
apply
are happen
to Change the verb form
happen
visit
that country
, we should adjust on
how we dress so that they don't find our behaviour offensive. Adjuting to other Change preposition
apply
cultures
is also
a mean
to build an inter-cultural relationship which is an important part of Fix the agreement mistake
means
globalisation
. A visitor should bear the responsibility to adjust with the locals if they want the visit
to have positive implications.
However
, cultural adjustment should not only be done in a
one-way. When the number of visitors is huge, Correct article usage
one
for instance
, in the case of migration or tourism, then
the host country
should embrace the differences and accomodate
them. Correct your spelling
accommodate
This
will ensure visitors will enjoy their visit
and in return will provide a positive impact to
their nation. Change preposition
on
For example
, tourists who enjoy their visit
would spend more during their trip or a country
which needs foreign labours
will have to make their culture more welcoming. As a host Correct your spelling
labourers
country
, welcoming other cultures
will be necessary in order to capitalise on the benefit of globalisation
.
In conclusion, adjusting cultures
by both parties will be unavoidable either deliberately or not. If we happen to do so, then
cross border
interactions will certainly have more positive implications in it.Add a hyphen
cross-border
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