The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie charts give information about the comparison of different kinds of energy
production
Use synonyms
of
France in 1995 and 2005. Change preposition
in
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of all energy Linking Words
production
stabled in two years.
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To begin
in 1995 percentage of gas and coal Linking Words
production
stood at 29,63% and 29,80 %. Following Use synonyms
next
10 years they increased just to 1% for both of them. Correct article usage
the next
In contrast
proportion of petro Linking Words
production
was 29,27% at the beginning, Use synonyms
it
fell Correct word choice
and it
down
approximately 10% Change preposition
by
at the end
of the period.
Nuclear Linking Words
production
was 6.40% in 1995, which was 2% more than other energy Use synonyms
production
at the same time. Use synonyms
At the end
of Linking Words
Add an article
the period
period
they almost 5% increased for both of them.Add a comma
period,
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