You work in a busy but poorly organized office and are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be considered for this job explain why you would be a suitable candidate outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make You should write at least 150 words.

Hello Samar, Hope

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reached

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you. I am

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writing

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letter to you as

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came to know that our management is

lookign

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looking

for a supervisor who can take control of the work at the front desk, i know summers are

comming

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coming

and we will be busy soon.

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why

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letter to you. As you know

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working at Motel 6

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3 years,

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would like to

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recommend

myself for the position of supervisor, as

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believe

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am capable of

doing

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multitasks,

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solving, and

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do believe

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have good communication skills

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it is within the team or with the customers. I understand you need

flexible

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scehdule

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schedule

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for the supervisor position,

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you need a leader who can direct the whole team toward

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then

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right path.

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would be really happy if

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could get trained for

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, and

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will not make you doubt your

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decision

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me

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supervsior

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supervisor

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,

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postion

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position

for me

benfit

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benefits

us both because you don't have a need to hire new

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and give them training ,

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benefit my Permanent Residence procedure as it will increase my score.

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will be really

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to you, hope you will look at

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matter

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personally

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sincerely

, Ashu

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