The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart describes the amount of percentage doing housework in
both
men
and women
in their daily life
. And, Each task represents the Fix the agreement mistake
lives
time
of use in both
of them.
Overall
, the percentage of cooking is the highest trend in both
men
and women
whereas
house repairs work is the lowest one in both
charts. The amount of time
spent on housework, both
of them use their time
mostly in cooking. In both
charts, it can be seen that females do household chores than
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more than
men
.
According to
the chart, cooking and cleaning have the highest trend in women
whereas
pet care and house repairs are most done by men
. The percentage of women
cooking has reached the top place of about 80% and they enjoy spending the
Correct article usage
apply
time
above 80minutes per day
. In contrast
, men
do cooking less than 20% of women
, just about 60 minutes in a single day
. Males like to do pet care is about 21% which is slightly higher than females about 2%. They both
equally spend their time
taking care of around 20 minutes in
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apply
day
.
Most of the men
like to do house repairs that
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apply
reached
19%, they spend the amount of Wrong verb form
reaching
time
close to 20 minutes, whereas
women
only do approximately 10% and
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of and
time
is very
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much
day
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