There is no doubt that modern means of communication have reduced the number of time inhabitants take to meet their
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. From here,
this
has had a negative effect on their social relationship.
However
, there are
also
some
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from many of
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connectionFix the agreement mistake
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.
I believe that virtual communication will have
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impact on social
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.
As weCorrect word choice
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are able to keep in touch with our friends who are in another country by messaging and
email
.
In addition
, if we don't have
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to send text massaging
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them
as well as
when they have some problem
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geographical location. We don’t have any opportunities in order to have a conversation with them until they go back home.
Moreover
, it extremely
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individuals who have
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or time
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.
On the other hand
, that
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the reason to people always use
email
or messaging and
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a physical meeting.
For instance
, when they go to a cafe with their friends , they only care about their
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.
Besides
that, they are depending too much on social media is tantamount to
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a fake
life
. Because,
for example
, when a girl
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her picture on Facebook or Instagram,
then
there are lots of
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a text to her but her don’t know anyone and she even doesn’t meet them in real
life
.That makes humans only connect with everyone by
email
,
messagingCorrect word choice
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and don’t want to go outside.
In the end, I believe the modern
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of communication helps people a lot to connect with their friends or
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in
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distance.
Nevertheless
, it
also
makes people rely too much on
email
or messaging and has had a negative effect on their social lives. We still maintain a balance between real
life
and fake
life
on the internet by messaging and
email
.