The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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who did not get full-time work after leaving college in 2008
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who getting a full-time job in graduate people approximately 30000 Use synonyms
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applying for part-time jobs about 2535 Use synonyms
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on the other hand
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