The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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In the above, there are two charts for comparison between the
students
who did not get full-time work after leaving college in 2008
while
showing the number
of graduates according to
the postgraduate students
there will see the largest number
who getting a full-time job in graduate people approximately 30000 students
.Meanwhile, a huge number
of postgraduate students
applying for part-time jobs about 2535 students
.
on the other hand
when we look for the least number
of employment usually are the graduated students
because the experience of work is less than postgraduate people . On the other hand
many graduated students
focus on voluntary rather than postgraduate people
to increase our experiences.Submitted by ocean1wolf on
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