The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The six pie charts illustrate how much water
used
for arduous aims in six regions of the world in percentage.
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agriculture
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purposes
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As we can see from the charts well over three quaters
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agriculture
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in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, meanwhile only Fix the agreement mistake
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, for domestic use spent
nearly a quarter.
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one third
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agriculture
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a half fraction for industrial use.Correct your spelling
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