The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
This
chart illustrates the percentage of water that Linking Words
used
Add a missing verb
is used
in
different purposes Change preposition
for
six
areas of the world. There are Industrial Change preposition
in six
use
, Agricultural Use synonyms
use
and Domestic Use synonyms
use
.
In most Use synonyms
continents
the most used is Agricultural Add a comma
continents,
use
. But in North Use synonyms
america
under Change the capitalization
America
a
half Remove the article
apply
water
Change preposition
of water
used
Add a missing verb
is used
by
Industrial Change preposition
for
use
, second only to Europe. In South America a small minority used Use synonyms
by
Domestic Change preposition
for
use
. Europe includes Use synonyms
also
three principles, just over a half is Industrial Linking Words
use
, Use synonyms
it
is the highest score. Africa expresses Agricultural Correct pronoun usage
which
use
, others in a tiny fraction. compared to Africa Use synonyms
in
Central Asia Change preposition
apply
also
Linking Words
a
very large proportion of Agricultural Add a missing verb
has a
use
. South East Asia Use synonyms
Linking Words
also
not far behind the previous ones over three Add a missing verb
is also
quarter
takes up Agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
use
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, each continent has a different Linking Words
using
of water the bar provided information that they Replace the word
use
use
for their own purposes.Use synonyms
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