The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the
customer
gladdening levels survey results given to 100 clients of the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010.
It is noticeable that the level of customer
satisfaction increased substantially in those two timeline
. Change the determiner
that two timeline
those two timelines
In addition
, the majority number of Parkway Hotel guests described its customer
service as satisfactory and poor in 2005, but the data in 2010 shows most customers thought that the hotel’s customer
service was good and excellent.
Firstly
, in 2005, the highest customer
emotion toward the service was satisfactory which accounted for 45 percent
of the chart. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
poor
comes behind with 21 Correct article usage
the poor
percent
, following that we have the very poor, good and excellent make up 15, 14, and 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively.
Despite how bad that was for people who visited Parkway Hotel, in 2010 data for good emotion was significantly increased and was the highest client evaluation with 39 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Next,
the excellent reviews grew by 23 percent
, making it take place in the top two positive commentaries in 2010 with 28 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. And Change the spelling
per cent
lastly
were
satisfactory, poor, and very poor criticisms take up 17,12, and 4 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
for each.Change the spelling
per cent
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