The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevent.
The bar
shart
illustrates the different ways families spent their salaries per week in 1968 and 2018.
Correct your spelling
chart
Overall
, it is apparent that in 1968 the income was mostly spent on food, which changed in 2018, making leisure the most favoured choice.
To elaborate, families spent exactly 35% of their weekly income on food, which is extremely high compared to fuel and power, standing at a little over 5%. There is not Linking Words
such
a dramatic Linking Words
devision
between other amenities Correct your spelling
division
decision
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however
, as housing and clothing both take up 10%.
In 2018 most Add the comma(s)
, however
poeple
spent over 20% of their money on leisure, Correct your spelling
people
while
only below 5% on personal goods. Housing and food are the Linking Words
runner ups
, both being above 15%. Other choices Add a hyphen
runner-ups
such
as household and personal goods though stand do not even reach 10%.Linking Words
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