The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The chart compares and contrasts the information about
graduates
' and postgraduates
' activity after graduation excluding full-time occupations in 2008 at United Kindom.
In general, the highest number of both graduates
and postgraduates
activity was performing further
study, while
the lowest was contributing to the voluntary work.
It can be seen that about 30,000 graduate individuals in the UK were most likely to be educated in more expert education. Meanwhile, part-time work and unemployment had a similar number of data within only 1,000 undergraduate alumni in difference. Moreover
, only 3,500 graduates
did the non-paid activity.
Moving on to the postgraduates
, it was clear that the overall
number of postgraduates
was lower than graduates
. Interestingly, performers of further
study and part-time work were similar at approximately 2,000. Just slightly after that, with in 50% difference in lower statistics was the unemployment postgraduates
. Similar to the undergraduate alumnus trends, only 345 individuals were running in voluntary projects.Submitted by karinara.projects on
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