The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development on the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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As of present, the industrial
area
of Norbiton lies just outside the town to the west. The area
is connected to a main straight road stretching west and east, an intersection with a north path
leading to the industrial site. It consists of 8 factories; 3 surround the central roundabout, and 4 line the connected road leading east, the final factory lying at the end
of the path
. The cluster of buildings generally sits adjacent to a river
up north, with farmland lying just on the other side.
The main plan for the future of the area
is to renovate it from an industrial location to a place more suitable as a commercial & residential
centre. The intersection will Correct word choice
and residential
instead
be replaced with a smaller roundabout, though the paths will generally remain the same; stretching west, east and north. There will be no factories in the new plot of land. Instead
, to start with, shops and a medical centre will be placed around the roundabout. The eastern road from the large central roundabout will still exist,
but will be lined Remove the comma
apply
instead
with housing for residents, and the end of the path
will have a school for children, in contrast
to a factory. Midway along this
eastern path
, a northern walkway will be built leading to a playground plot.
In terms of completely new installations, two new roads will be laid stretching from the main roundabout. A northwestern path
, with two spaces for housing along the way, and a north path
, with a housing square on the side. The main purpose of the northern path
, however
, is to connect the farmland and the town area
, with a new bridge to be built over the river
. Larger space for housing will also
be built on the other side of the river
. In summary, the final renovation of the industrial area
will contain 7 plots of land for residential housing spaces, a space for shops, a medical centre, a playground & school
, Correct word choice
and school
as well as
a bridge to cross over the north river
.Submitted by lydiaia on
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