The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.

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The line chart displays the divorce rates during the period from 2011 to 2015 in

Finland

and

Sweden

Overall

Finland

and

Sweden

have a fluctuating change in their statistics between that time,

however

, it considerably highlights that

Sweden

shows a high percentage of divorce in all years compared with

Finland

had between 45% and 40% percentage of divorces during 2011 and 2015,

also

in 2011 with approximately 38% decrease of at least 5% to later increase each year until 2014, showing and stable bar from that.

Sweden

increased by more than 5% divorces in one year and after that started to decrease slightly to be below 40% in 2025, being the lowest data in comparison with all registered years of analysis.

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