The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
The diagram above demonstrates statistics regarding the varied portion of international learners among Canadian
universities'
graduates in different cities from 2001 to 2006.
Looking from an Change noun form
universities
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the figure of global students who graduated from all Canadian universities in 2001 is considerably fewer in proportions compared to the year 2006, with Alberta colleges as the sole exception.
In 2001, the percentage of worldwide graduates from tertiary education located in New Brunswick was the highest at approximately 7% followed by Nova Scotia and Quebec at above 5%. Furthermore
, Alberta has a share of 4%, while
British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and
Labrador, and Ontario possessed a slightly Correct word choice
apply
fewer
figure proportionally.
Comparatively, 2006 witnessed a growing number of Correct word choice
lower
overall
percentages with New Burnswick
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Brunswick
stood
with the largest share of above 10%, Wrong verb form
standing
as well as
British Columbia and Nova Scotia's higher education institutions. Following behind, Quebec has also
elevated to around 8% in proportion along with
other regions just below it. Presenting a notably contrast pattern, Alberta's universities have diminished their portion of international learners to just under 5%, which was the lowest among all cities.Submitted by jelitasofiaz on
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