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The chart bellow shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and proportion of men and women who held them in 1999

The chart bellow shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and proportion of men and women who held them in 1999
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The bar chart given
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illustrates
 the percentage of
males
 and
females
 which skilled
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 different levels of qualifications in Australia in 1999.
Overall
, it can be seen that, expect undergraduate
diploma
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diplomas
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 and bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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males
 had more
participances
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participation
 in skilled vocational
diploma
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diplomas
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, postgraduate
diploma
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diplomas
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, and
masters
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master's
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degree
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degrees
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 than
females
. first of all, we observe a significant difference between
man
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men
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 and
woman
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women
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 which was 80
percent
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 in skilled vocational
diploma
.
Moreover
, the pattern of both
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groups was the same
in
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for
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 postgraduate
diploma
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diplomas
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 and master's
degree
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degrees
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 which
it
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was 70 and 60 for
males
 and 30 and 40 for
females
.
On the other hand
, we see the most popular
degree
 among
famales
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females
families
 which was
undergraduate
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an undergraduate
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diploma
 and was 70.
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males
 dedicated just about 35
percent
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per cent
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in
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to
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this
degree
.
Additionally
, bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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allocated
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50
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to 50
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percent
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per cent
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 of
females
 and 45
percent
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per cent
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 of
males
.
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