The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts changing
of
Change preposition
in
energy
production
between 1995 and 2005 year in France. It is evident from data that there is a decrease in perto consumption
, while
production
of remained
flues grew. The biggest change Wrong verb form
remaining
show
other Change the verb form
shows
energy
consumption
, while
gas and coal production
remained unchanged.
It is interesting to note that the most remarkable difference is in consumption
of nuclear Correct article usage
the consumption
energy
. Production
of nuclear energy
rose for
approximately 4 Change preposition
by
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
petro production
had decreased by 2005 for
almost 10%. Change preposition
by
Overall
, in a
year 1995 gas, coal and Change the article
the
petro
had almost equal partition, and all together occupied 90% of all Correct your spelling
petrol
production
.
Also
coal and gas Add a comma
Also,
production
remained relatively the same, changed for
just 1 Change preposition
by
percent
. On Change the spelling
per cent
other
hand, other Correct article usage
the other
energy
sources consumption
was just a 5 percent
fractionChange the spelling
per cent
,
and almost doubled becoming 9,10 Remove the comma
apply
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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