The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart depicts how households in a country allocate their weekly income between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, food expense was the most dominant by far in 1968, and leisure and housing outcome
were the most significant expenditures for the year 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
outcomes
However
, the proportion
of fuel and power category
was the lowest for both years.
In 1968, the most dominant spending was food with just over a third of the total and Fix the agreement mistake
categories
this
proportion
followed
by the percentages of housing and garment expenses with 10% each. Add a missing verb
was followed
While
the proportion
of fuel and power category was the lowest with around 6%, the percentages of transportation, household items, and personal goods were just under a tenth each.
After fifty years, food outcome
lost Fix the agreement mistake
outcomes
its
roughly half of the previous Correct pronoun usage
apply
proportion
and dramatically dropped to about 17%. While
the proportion
of leisure spending became the highest expenditure category with just over a fifth, housing increased to just under a fifth of total
, demonstrating the second-highest. The Add an article
the total
proportion
of remaining categories varied between approximately 3% and 10% in 2018.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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