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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts show the
overall
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 quantity and
time
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 used for
males
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 and females to do four types of household chores (cooking, cleaning, pet caring, and repairing the
house
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). The data is presented in percentages and
minutes
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. In general, females have a bigger portion, both in percentage and
time
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, to do two types of housework than
males
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.
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,
house
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 repairs are the least activity that women and
men
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 do. Women do more cooking and cleaning than
men
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, with a total percentage of around 80% and 60% of each. Inversely, the rest of household chores, pet care, and
house
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 repairs are the most
men
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 do than female with percentages of 22% and 18%.
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, females use more
time
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 than
males
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 to cook and clean than
males
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 with a total
time
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 of around 85
minutes
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 and 69
minutes
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, respectively. Meanwhile,
men
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 use their
time
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 in
house
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 repair more than women, with a total
time
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 of around 20
minutes
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. For the
rest activity
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rest-activity
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, pet care has the same quantity between
men
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 and female, around 20
minutes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, males, house, minutes, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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