The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given figure illustrates an estimate related to
energy
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generation in the future.
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,
it is clear that
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the process contains a total of six stages, which starts with composting and culminates in
production
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the production
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of
electricty
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electricity
. Looking more closely at the process, it begins with obtaining methane gas from various sources of alternatives, like leaves, food or scraps in a steel tank. It is important that
three quarter
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three-quarters
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of the tank should be
fulled
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filled
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with compost and water.
Then
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, the gas, which is obtained
as a result
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of
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the fermantation
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fermantation
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fermentation
process is canalized to
a
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storage by man-made tubes. In the subsequent phase, the gas is directed to a compressor, and thanks to a combustion machine,
the
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mechanical
energy
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is produced. At the
consequtive
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consecutive
stage,
this
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mechanical
energy
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is turned into electrical
energy
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by a generator.
Finally
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, electrical
energy
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is directed to a battery, and stored
in
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there for home use.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renewable energy
  • sustainability
  • solar panels
  • energy storage
  • wind turbine
  • geothermal
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • grid
  • biomass
  • photovoltaic
  • smart meter
  • energy consumption
  • insulation
  • heat pump
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