You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know: when you will be arriving and leaving; what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost; inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

#weekend #hotel #arrangement #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest

Dear Mr. Boris, I hope

this

email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to reserve a room in your renowned

hotel

as I have planned to spend a weekend with my family next month.

This

is Samuel from Chittagong and we have planned to spend quality time with my family members in Cox'sbazar, the largest seabeach in the world.

Therefore

, our tentative arrival date is 1st of May and leaving date is 5th of May. As far as I am concerned, your

hotel

has been providing good quality services for their valued customers in terms of accommodation, room and food services for a long time at affordable cost. During

this

vacation, we have been looking for two double-bed rooms with sea view facilities, and

also

please let us know the room prices too.

Moreover

, we are interested in knowing about other activities and beautiful places available near your

hotel

. We are expecting your proper suggestions so that we can enjoy every moment during

this

stay at your

hotel

. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Robert

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a distinct idea and minimizes overlap between topics.

Coherence & Cohesion

To improve logical structure, use clear signposting language to indicate transitions between points.

Task Achievement

Match the greeting and closing to the formal nature of the letter; aim to be polite yet succinct.

Task Achievement

Address all aspects of the prompt clearly; each should have its own paragraph for clarity.

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Remember to maintain a consistent formal tone throughout, avoiding overly casual phrases.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

188 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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