The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about the
water
use
percentage for different purposes in six different areas of the world.
Overall
, an agricultural purpose leads to the largest portion of
water
use
in all countries except in Europe and North
America
. Meanwhile, in these two countries, the largest ones are in industrial
use
. To commence with, in Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia, the
use
of
water
in the agricultural sector accounts for more than 80%, making them the largest percentage among other areas. Having the same trend, agricultural-used
water
in South
America
is the second largest at 71%. Compared to domestic and industrial purposes in that four different parts, they only take a small portion at 10% and lower, except for industrial
use
in South East Asia at 12%, and domestic
use
in South
America
at 19%. As regards North
America
and Europe, the Industrial sector dominated
water
use
at 48% and 53%, followed by agricultural-used
water
at 39% and 32% respectively. In terms of domestic
use
, Europe is 3% higher than North
America
which only comprises 13%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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