The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The six charts give information about six regions'
water
usage for three different types of uses, measured in percentage.
Overall
,
water
for the agricultural sector dominates the majority of
water
usage proportion,
while
Domestic Use is relatively less in consumption. To commence with, in South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
,
water
used for agriculture is around forty-five per cent of the total amount.
Moreover
, only in North
America
and Europe, it used is approximately a third in ratio. Industrial sector intake is the biggest ratio of
water
used, in North
America
and South
America
, at half on average. Meanwhile,
water
for Domestic Use in all the areas does not exceed a fifth of total usage, with the highest in South
America
at 19%.
Furthermore
, the Industrial Use in South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
are under 10%, except the South East
Asia
at 12%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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