The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the average nutrients in three of the meals in the USA, which potentially have adverse effects on human well-being if consumed too much.
Overall
,it can clearly be seen that nutrients consumed for breakfast
are the lowest among other types of meals.While
,dinner contains the highest nutrition,with the exception of sugar added.
To begin
with,sodium is the highest sodium-contained meal,dinner is made of more than two-fifths of the ratio.On the other hand
,lunch constitutes almost one-third of the proportion
.Meanwhile, for breakfast
and snacks , they have the same proportion
of 14%.Compared to saturated fat, there is no big difference between proportions,constituting 37% and 26%, respectively.In addition
,saturated fat in breakfast
makes up 16% ,in
contrast
the Add the comma(s)
contrast,
proportion
in snacks contained one-fifth of the ratio.
However
,the added sugars proportion
is a little different from the other nutrients.The highest meal containing added sugar is snacks,which contain two-fifths of the chart.The lowest is in breakfast
,which is only 16%.Furthermore
.the proportion
for lunch and dinner only constitute 19%and 23% ,respectivelySubmitted by tuan.kurtulush1234 on
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